Openings are important. I need to remember this as I write. Because my openings generally suck.
Today, I'm looking at movie and TV show openings as inspiration. Openings really have to set the stage. They have to tell a mini-story, and quickly, to get the reader hooked.
I love this opening for its simplicity:
This tells us all we need to know in a simple package with a snappy tune: There's a bomb in a Russian nesting doll, set to go off just before midnight. Then there's a hint about a treaty. Ah, the setting, or at least one of them.
The tune is important too. It's swanky, to fit the spy theme. But it's jolly, not heavy. So it adds a bit of fun. So not a heavy spy thriller, but something different.
Here's another one (and yes, I know this also stars Bill Murray. Can't help that.
I'm cheating a little with this one, as you'll see in a moment. Again, a happy tune -- a polka -- as you might encounter at some small hick-town event. But all we see is clouds. And they're building, just like the music. It's almost etheral. We don't know anything about the characters or setting. Or maybe we do.
This is a film with two openings, however. Here's the whole thing:
Now we get a lot more about the characters and setting. But we're still wondering, what do the clouds at the beginning have to do with anything? They're setting the stage. Some foreshadowing that the beginning needs.
Also, that line: "For your information, hairdo, there's a major network interested in me."
"Yeah, the Home Shopping Network."
Kills me every time.
Cheating with this next one, too.
Here's a beginning that sets a mood, nothing more. Maybe hints about characters that we recognize after the story is over, but right now, just mood:
What's fun about this film is that it has a second beginning, right at the end. We get hints to the further story beyond what we've seen:
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There's Treasure Everywhere, by Bill Watterson. 173 pages.
Read in 2025
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AI Superpowers: China, Silicon Valley, and the New World Order, by Kai-Fu Lee. 254 pages.
Book of Boy, The; by Catherine Gilbert Murdock. 271 pages.
Book of Mormon, The; The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, 535 pages.
Child's Garden of Verses, A; by Robert Louis Stevenson and illustrated by Jessie Willcox Smith. 105 pages.
Creativity: A Short and Cheerful Guide, by John Cleese. 103 pages.
Dave Bartry's Only Travel Guide You'll Ever Need, by Dave Barry. 171 pages.
Diary of A Wimpy Kid Hot Mess, by Jeff Kinney. 217 pages.
Fall of Richard Nixon, The; A Reporter Remembers Watergate, by Tom Brokaw. 227 pages.
God's Smuggler, by Brother Andrew and John and Elizabeth Sherill. 241 pages.
Going Postal, by Terry Pratchett. 377 pages.
Leper of St. Giles, The; by Ellis Peters. 265 pages.
Lincoln at Gettysburg, by Garry Wills. 320 pages.
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Raising Steam, by Terry Pratchett. 365 pages.
Rakkety Tam, by Brian Jacques. 371 pages.
Reflections of A Scientist, by Henry Eyring. 101 pages.
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Rocket Men, by Craig Nelson. 404 pages.
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Ze Page Total: 7,776
The Best Part
God's Smuggler, by Brother Andrew and and John and Elizabeth Sherill.
(Andrew and his wife Corrie have just consented to sell their home in Holland for the equivalent of $15,000 so they can purchase 5,000 pocket bibles in Russian for distribution to the faithful in Russia.)
[A phone call] For it was from the Dutch Bible Society, asking me if I could arrange to have the printing done somewhere else.
I had? In England! Well, here is what they proposed. They would pay half the cost. If the Bibles cost $3 each to print, I could purchase them for $1.50. And although the Society would pay for the entire printing as soon as it was ready, I would need to pay for my supplies only as I used them. If this was satisfactory --
If it was satisfactory! I could scarcely believe what I had heard. I could be able to buy six hundred Bibles -- all we could carry at one time -- right away out of our "Russian Bible" fund. And we wouldn't have to leave our home, and Corrie could go on sewing the pink curtains for Steffie's room, and I could set out my lettuce flats and -- I could hardly wait to tell Corrie what God had done with the thimbleful of willingness we had offered Him.
Sure. Chalk it up to coincidence all you want. But God does work in mysterious ways, and recognizes the gift of sacrifice.
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