Wednesday, June 13, 2018

RFAK No. 7, Winter Falls, by Jacque Stevens

Oh, so this is a retelling. Of a Hans Christian Andersen story, “The Snow Queen”. It’s one I’ve never heard of. But that’s not saying much, as when it comes to HCA, I haven’t read a lot.

So I didn’t go into reading Jacque Stevens’ Winter Falls with any preconceived notions or baggage about how the story should go.

There are two worlds here. The first is the snowy world of Katie Graham and her family, and the roguish Shay. There are inns and ice skates. Logging and trains. There’s a Model T at one point, if I recall, and another male on crutches and with an IV in his arm. This world is muddled. At first, it felt like the timeless, somewhat wooly world created by Lois Lowry in The Giver, but the more I read, the more this world entered the wool of ambiguity. Katie’s specific slice of the world seemed pre-industrial revolution. But then there was the Model T and the IV. So I don’t know.

The second world is richer – it’s the world of fairy tales where (spoiler) Katie finds the mother she never knew and just leaves her there.

Like all fairy tales, this is a tale of wanting something. Katie wants a lot. But there are a lot of complications in Katie’s way, least of all the Snow Queen who comes to her vaguely time-defined village and takes away Shay, who could probably be played by sleazy-cool John Cusack if this book were filmed. (He might be a little old for the role, but you get the picture.) Katie’s biggest obstacle is, of course, Katie, something she learns while on her journey through the fairy tale world, which she entered after leaping after Ophelia off a bridge into the water.

Things just kinda blandly happen in this book. Even the battle between good and evil at the end is fairly bland, with no real sense of menace (you’d think a Snow Queen would get tired of freezing her enemies or creatures-as-tools, but nooooooooo). And the encounter with the fairy of fall? Borr-ing. This is where Katie meets the cat-like woman who is her mother, lost in this fairy tale limbo between life and “the light,” which is left undefined. Her mother shows little interest in her, and we learn why (no spoilers this time). Even the How Do We Solve This Problem denouement at the end is kinda bland.

Stevens falls into the same trap I do as a writer – all of her characters sound the same. There’s little variation in voice.

It’s an okay book if you’re a fan of the Hans Christian Andersen tale, and want a slightly soppy romance. Other than that . . . 

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